What you'll learn in the PRO COURSE

With the help of expert videos, downloads, templates and examples, you'll be writing your best BYU application essays - faster and more efficiently than any other method.

  • How to personalize the BYU Aims and meaningfully connect them to each essay.

  • How to identify and tell compelling personal stories that demonstrate your potential as a successful BYU student.

  • How to approach each essay prompt to address BYU’s specific expectations.

  • How to start each essay to “hook” the reader, and how to conclude each essay to make a powerful connection.

  • How to write clear and concise paragraphs that answer each prompt completely and deeply.

  • How to edit and revise your essays utilizing proprietary feedback guides.

Reviews for the PRO COURSE

“I started the course pretty close to the deadline, with about three weeks to write the essays. The course is really helpful but difficult to manage if you’re already super busy and cutting it close to the due date. I would recommend starting as early as possible so that you can really take advantage of this resource”

“The course provided me with an organized way to plan and outline my essays. This made the entire essay writing process less stressful and manageable.”

“I was utterly blown away by Susie's professionalism, knowledge, and ability to guide my son in writing his BYU application essays. The courses were helpful, thorough, and so well put together. The course materials were excellent, and made it so easy to break down this overwhelming task of writing the essays into manageable chunks.”

“Lucas found the workshops to be helpful. Talking through topics and do's and dont's helped him feel more confident about what he was writing. The course really helped him make the essays more succinct and direct. He (we) felt really good about what he turned in.”

“Susie is really good at explaining complicated topics in a simple way. She validated my ideas and increased my confidence, but also gave specific, useable feedback about how to improve. She is fun to communicate with and has a great personality. She is the best online teacher I have ever worked with. If you are unsure if this course is right for you, just go for it. You won't regret it. ”

30-minute LIVE coaching session included!

Each enrollment includes a 30-minute evaluation and coaching session with Susie to answer your BYU essay questions and see how the course can be customized for your needs.

Course curriculum

    1. A message from your instructor

    2. How to use this course

    3. Tell me a little bit about your writing.

    1. What you will learn in this lesson

    2. The importance of essay mentors

    3. The biggest mistake you could make and how to avoid it (with worksheet download)

    4. How to use your BYU Essay Planning Chart

    5. Lesson #1: Summary

    1. What you will learn in this lesson

    2. Overview of the BYU Aims (with worksheet download)

    3. How to complete your Aims worksheets

    4. Lesson #2: Summary

    1. Help us stay connected! (Press "Complete & Continue" when done)

    2. What you will learn in this lesson

    3. Finding your best stories using Memory Mining (with worksheet download)

    4. How to complete your Memory Mining worksheets

    5. Lesson #3: Summary

    1. What you will learn in this lesson

    2. Steps for choosing stories and Aims for each essay (with worksheet download)

    3. How to complete your stories and Aims worksheets

    4. Lesson #4: Summary

    1. What you will learn in this lesson (with outline download)

    2. How to complete the "Meeting Needs" outline

    3. How to write your first essay draft

    4. How to use mentor feedback to revise your essays

    5. Lesson #5: Summary

    6. Meeting Needs LIVE workshop recording

About this course

  • $295.00
  • 11 Lessons + Supplemental Resources
  • 46 minutes of video content


  • How long does it take to get through the course?

    You can complete all of the video and written instructions within a day. However, to complete all of the worksheets, and give yourself time to get feedback on your essays, we recommend a minimum of two weeks.

  • How can this course save me time?

    This course teaches you step-by-step how to write each element of every application essay for BYU quickly and correctly. By the time you are done with the basic worksheets, the essays almost write themselves.

  • How does this course help me write my BEST BYU essays?

    BYU Application essays are NOT like any other essay you have written in the past. Susie has converted 15 years of helping students write successful college essays into proprietary templates, guides, and examples that ensure you meet or exceed BYU's specific and unique essay requirements.

  • Does the course come with live help?

    Each enrollment includes a 30-minute coaching session with Susie. Additionally, the course comes with an open discussion forum and you are welcome to message Susie anytime with questions or suggestions.

  • Is there a satisfaction guarantee?

    Of course we cannot guarantee that anyone who takes this course will be accepted into BYU. If, however, you are not satisfied with the course, we are happy to provide you a full refund by emailing info@collegeessaybuilder.com within 15 days of the original purchase date.

Final Submission Deadline is December 15th.

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